Between Light And Nowhere

I was attracted by the idea 'Between the light & nowhere' but i felt like it could've been greatly improved because the 'nowhere' isn't greatly showing and the picture lacks a source of light reflecting on the tittle

I enjoyed the color's but i'd prefer to turn it into black & white to bring it's meaning further out. However i'm not pleased by the level of quality this picture's presenting due to the grainy effect which look's like high usage of ISO level's.

I liked the touch of leave's flying that show movement in the picture but adding a tree in the distant background would give a stronger effect of being surrounded in a natural habitat far away from the city life.

What i would've been impressed by is if you had added more cloud's to the upper part of the picture instead of additional negative space in the center, i would also like to see a ray of light shinning at your model instead of on the ground only.

Try re-editing the picture with different effect's that don't show extensive editing that will cover the beauty of the picture.

Last but not least, i would prefer a female model to add sensitivity to the picture or at least a shirtless male model, not a male wearing a thick sweater because it lacks character of the tittle.