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White Night by MartinStranka White Night by MartinStranka
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White Night by =strany ( Featured by Kaz-D )
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The position of the model is incredible, due to the fact that it almost looks inhuman in that very few people could stand like that for very long- in such an unnatural pose. The pose lends its beauty to balance the horizontal composition within the square.

The color scheme is pretty well done, the yellow is too bright in the background and almost not the right color of yellow.

The concept itself is creative, and the way you went about it was different. I have a criticism about the way you did it though: the circular bokeh in the background breaks the purposeful making of bokeh inside the camera, only a cheap camera would produce a bokeh that perfectly circular and hard edged, and it looks placed there, it also has banding in it. To improve the banding you should do several things: work in a format that condenses less than a jpeg, like a 16 bitt tiff. You should add noise or texture to match the roughness of the ground to it, not necessarily 100% as rough, but enough to soften the glaring faux bokeh.
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Gemmacat1 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Professional Photographer
such beautiful images !!! really captivating
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hosagu Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
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Filmandy Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Freaking fantastic. 
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Ondrejvasak Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013
Great idea, nice photo but the bokeh doesn't seem to be real..
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Karinta Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Student General Artist
Fascinating bokeh.
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cleardefination Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
Its like a jolt of energy just got to her, you've photographed a feeling . As i see in your other works.. its just kickass to see this.
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aepainter Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Student Photographer
Aweesome
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malaugusto Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013   Photographer
This superb work has been featured here: 50 Captivating Examples of Bokeh Photography.
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InkStarRosie Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student General Artist
seriously this is a beautiful portrait...doesnt even look real.
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MrEverythings Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student General Artist
incredible. everything is so dynamic! the movement, the lights, and surreal quailty of it all...
oh can congrats, i saw your other photo on the cover of "No Words"!
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